You tell me that you - yourself - are space and are able to observe the thoughts in it.

This thought comes to you as a question:

"Is the unquestionable and willpower inseparable?"

By now, you know that words have almost no meaning, so you've acknowledged a certain realism about your story. Still, you're asking if you can do better. So remember that your story is what it is, it is for you and is about you.

"Where is the balance between having something on my mind and sharing it in a constructed form?" you still want to know.

You need to keep a close eye on the ego in both aspects in your constant search for balance.